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GRAMMAR AND MECHANICS Sentence Structure: Comma Splices (Exercise B)
1. Husbands and wives frequently disagree on important
matters, that doesn't mean that their marriages are
bad. ___
2. If I were a rich man, I think I would be very happy. ___
3. If I were a poor man, I could also be happy. ___
4. I am neither a rich man nor a poor man, unfortunately,
I am a member of the overburdened middle class. ___
5. Working in a cold office is unpleasant, on the other
hand, not working at all would be even more unpleasant. ___
6. Boston is a major metropolis, yet it is small in
comparison to New York City. ___
7. Archeology is an interesting field of study, one
problem, though, is the lack of career opportunities. ___
8. This generation has been called the "me" generation,
one wonders what the next generation will be called. ___
9. If you so much as open your mouth to talk, I'll
scream; I won't take this anymore. ___
10. Hardship is supposed to build a person's character,
but it does not do much for his bank account. ___
11. Some holidays are greatly overrated, Valentine's Day
is one of them. ___
12. Electricity is really an abstract concept, it can't
be seen, felt, or smelled. ___
13. The boss gave me a deadline of thirty days, the
project should be completed by then. ___
14. Signs and slogans are unwanted intrusions into an
individual's conscious thoughts, on the other hand,
that's what ad agencies are paid to do. ___
15. Sociologists claim that modern man has a passive
character, he will usually accept, rather than
fight. ___
16. Because first impressions are so important, parents
should choose their child's name with care. ___
Comma Splices in a Paragraph
Identify the comma splices in the following paragraph by placing CS
next to the sentence; then, correct the sentence. If the sentence
is correct, then place a C beside it.
(1) Do you want to start a violent argument? (2) You need not
raise the traditionally inflammatory topics of politics, money, and
religion, instead just mention chili. (3) For some Americans chili
is an epicurean dish; for others, it is a tasteless, plebeian,
fattening concoction to be avoided at all costs. (4) Some
hostesses proudly plan a dinner party around chili, others would
consider it the worst sort of affront to serve chili to guests.
(5) In addition to the disagreement over the dish's merit, disputes
abound over its preparations--disputes which pit parent against
child, wife against husband, friend against friend, and set an
otherwise quiet evening aflame. (6) Some connoisseurs, for
example, insist that chili be made only with beef, with top-grade
steak, carefully shredded, the preferable cut. (7) Others retort
that any meat is acceptable, chili, in fact, has been made only
with beef, with pork, mutton, even armadillo. (8) Another dispute
is the presence or absence of beans. (9) For some, chili without
kidney beans is not chili at all, others insist that putting beans
in chili is like icing a home-made cake with canned frosting. (10)
Finally, connoisseurs argue about the relative strength of the
concoction, while some like it bland, others like it hot, so hot as
to burn the tongue and provide a convenient excuse for another cold
drink. (11) So take your choice; spurn the dish or enjoy its many
varieties. (12) Just keep your opinions to yourself.
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