HUNTER COLLEGE READING/WRITING CENTER
THE DOCUMENTED ESSAY/RESEARCH PAPER
General Guidelines
A research paper or documented essay
is a piece of writing in which you incorporate information--facts,
arguments, opinions--taken from the writings of people in a particular
field. Sometimes a research paper is no more than a report of current
thinking in a field, but more often a research paper demonstrates
a thesis of your own, relying on outside (secondary) sources for
support and development of the thesis. In other words, you
should not think of a research paper as merely a series of
quotations from several sources on a subject, or just a summary,
in your words, of those sources--although you will probably
include both quotation and summary in your paper. Rather, the
research paper is your synthesis of information on a topic: the
bringing together of information from various sources to
establish a new perspective, create a new understanding of that
material. It is your contribution to the field you are studying
through your research.
Writing a research paper involves moving through several
stages and performing a number of tasks. Although it is not a
strictly orderly process (you will be involved in several
activities simultaneously), there is a sequence to follow with
starting, developing, and finishing strategies.
Characteristically, the process entails narrowing a large,
general subject to arrive at a carefully focused thesis and
collecting and incorporating evidence/information that explains,
clarifies, illustrates, argues and otherwise supports your
thesis. Because both research and writing involve going back
over things as much as going ahead, you will need to give
yourself plenty of time for exploring different directions
(including some that you may abandon), for seeking more
information and discovering connections and relationships within
it, for clarifying your understanding of your topic in order to
create a working thesis, for refining the thesis, and for writing
and revising the final paper.
GETTING STARTED
The first step in writing a research paper is to ask a
meaningful question about a subject. A meaningful question is
one which deals with an important aspect of a subject and which
can be answered, at least tentatively, with available
information. If your professor assigns a topic or a question for
you to write on, s/he has done some of your work for you. A
professor's question is based on knowledge of the important
issues in his/her field. But if you are given only a broad
subject or if you have to choose your own subject, you must do
some preliminary research to find out what kinds of problems or
issues are dealt with by people involved in the field. For this
preliminary investigation you may consult encyclopedias,
textbooks, or other general reference works which offer summaries
of general knowledge in the field. A look at indexes or
periodicals in the field will give you a sense of the topics that
experts are writing about.
TECHNIQUES FOR GENERATING IDEAS
Brainstorming
-on paper
-into a tape recorder
-with a classmate
-with your instructor
-using lists or diagrams
-using heuristic questions: who, what, where, when, why, how?
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Asking yourself questions
-What have I learned about the subject from class or from my notes?
-What have I learned from the text(s) in the course?
-What do I know about the subject from my own experience?
-How does it relate to my own interests and concerns?
-Where can I find more background information on the subject
that will stimulate further thought or more questions?
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As you do your preliminary reading, make notes on questions
that occur to you, on areas that particularly interest you, on
problems that suggest themselves. You must read actively,
probing the material for a perspective to which you can commit
yourself. It is impossible to predict how long this first step
will take, but do not expect the process to yield immediate
results. Give yourself time to consider your preliminary reading
and to play with the possibilities.
Consider the overall strategy for your paper:
Should it...
-review sources? (arrangement by ideas--not authors)
-analyze and synthesize sources? (arrangement by arguments-- not authors)
-persuade the reader? (argue for a thesis of your own)
-inform the reader?
-do a combination of the above?
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When you have narrowed your subject to a manageable topic,
you can begin to focus your research on materials that refer to
your particular topic. (How large a topic you can handle
depends, to a large extent, on the length of the assigned paper
and the amount of time you have.) As you continue to focus your
research on a limited area, you may formulate a preliminary,
tentative thesis--a main idea or proposition which your paper
will discuss.
* Note: see handout--
Developing a Thesis Statement
Having a preliminary thesis will help make you an active
reader. As you examine sources, look for quotes, illustrations,
statistics, etc. that support your stated position. Be aware
that your thesis will evolve as you continue your research. Do
not feel obligated to stay with a thesis that does not
accommodate your changing understanding of a topic.
LOCATING SOURCES
Writing an effective documented essay often depends on your
ability to utilize the resources available in the Hunter College
library or a borough or local branch of the public library.
Finding and examining research materials as quickly as possible
will result in more effective research. If you have not used a
library for research before, begin by consulting librarians.
They can let you know what kinds of materials are available and
help you use indexes, guides, and computer data bases to locate
sources of information. Second, use your sources efficiently.
When you find a book you think may be useful, scan the table of
contents and the index and read the introduction to determine
whether or not the book has information you need. Check the
author's bibliography to see what sources s/he has consulted.
When you read a useful book or periodical, look for more work by
that author or check additional issues of the same magazine for
related articles. Third, use your professor as a resource. S/he
should be able to guide you to promising material by helping you
to evaluate your sources and directing you to the important
writers and works in a field.
ORGANIZING THE RESEARCH AND THE ESSAY
As you read, keep accurate notes. You may take notes in a
notebook, but many writers find that research is easier to
organize and manipulate if it is on index cards. For each source
you use, make a bibliography card with all the information you
will need for bibliography and footnote citations: the
author(s)'name(s), the title, the publisher, the city of
publication, and the date of publication. Then, on separate note
cards copy the quotation, fact, statistic, or idea that you want
to use from the source, one item to a card. Keep track of the
source for each card by noting the author's last name or a
shortened version of the title on the card.
*Note: See handout--
Notetaking
Since you want to avoid making your paper a string of
quotations, and you do want to incorporate your research into the
text of your paper, try to paraphrase on your note cards instead
of transcribing long blocks of quotations. A paraphrase is not a
sentence from the source in which you have changed two or three
words and then used the rest of the author's sentence. A
paraphrase is a brief account of the author's meaning in your own
words. Typically, you will paraphrase a passage of several
paragraphs or pages (or even longer sections) in a few sentences.
The effort of paraphrasing is worth it because the process of
paraphrasing will sharpen your understanding of a source as you
draw out the main ideas.
*Note: see handout--
Quotation, Paraphrase, and Plagiarism
It is wise to stop every so often, perhaps after reading
each source, to reconsider your thesis. Should it be refined,
qualified, expanded, abandoned? When you begin to write the
paper, your judgment may change, of course. The very act of
trying to write the paper, to shape the material, will prompt you
to see your topic in new ways, clarifying what was hazy, perhaps
even leading you to revise your thesis.
Your thesis is the key to organizing your paper. It defines
your purpose in the paper and so suggests a shape which will
convey that purpose to a reader. Different writers progress to a
final thesis in different ways. Some write a rough draft
immediately, without worrying much about defining a precise
thesis. These writers clarify their intentions as they write,
arriving at a thesis by struggling with their material until a
purpose and shape begin to emerge. Typically, this approach
involves rewriting repeatedly, perfecting the shape of the paper
through a series of drafts. Other writers first formulate a
thesis and then outline a tentative structure before writing
their first draft. In this case too, of course, rewriting will
be necessary because ideas will emerge during writing that may
not fit into a pre-determined outline structure. But the work of
perfecting an outline may accomplish the work of several drafts.
*Note: see handouts--
Standard Outlines,
Formal Outlines
It is useful to review the notes from your reading and list
important details from these notes (those that recur or support
your hypothesis, for example) as a first step to setting up
categories for an outline. Moving from notes to an outline
involves connecting the information from different note cards
according to categories of important ideas. As with your
tentative thesis, your outline may move through more than one
stage. You may see gaps that need to be filled, information that
needs to be added or deleted, or material that needs to be
rearranged to produce a logical sequence of ideas. It may become
clear to you that you need more information about some aspect of
your topic, and at this point you may return to the library for
further research. You may even do this more than once as you go
through several drafts. When you have enough information to
adequately support your thesis or fulfill the paper's purpose
while satisfying the required length of the assignment, you may
consider your research complete. The final outline will serve as
a bridge between the information you have gathered and the
presentation of that information in the documented essay/research
paper.
WRITING AND REVISING
Preparation of a first draft involves understanding the
nature and function of the three basic sections of an essay: the
introduction, which places the research question within a context
and presents the thesis; the main body paragraphs, each of which
develops a separate but related aspect of the topic; and the
conclusion, which usually reviews the thesis and major supporting
points and may also suggest questions for further study. Include
quotes and paraphrased material where appropriate. In general,
keep quotes as short as possible, so they serve your purpose and
do not dominate the essay.
Arriving at the final draft through a series of revisions
involves shifting from the point of view of a writer to that of a
reader. As you write and revise, consider your audience: who is
likely to read this kind of paper? To "see again" with the
distance of the reader leads the writer to analyze what has been
written for clarity, organization, and unity. As in writing any
essay, you should not expect your paper to come out finished in
one draft. Allow yourself time for rewriting.
Reread each draft as you would any essay, checking for the
following:
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UNITY:
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Does everything in the paper relate to the thesis?
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COHERENCE:
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Do paragraphs and sections follow one another in a logical order?
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DEVELOPMENT:
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Are your points fully explained?
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STYLE:
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Are ideas expressed clearly?
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MECHANICS:
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Is the paper in correct, edited English?
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CITATION AND DOCUMENTATION
Citations (parenthetical citation, footnotes, or endnotes)
are not so mysterious as they sometimes seem. They are included
in a research paper in order to give credit to an author for
information or ideas taken from his/her work. Documentation also
includes complete publication information so that a reader can
locate and review the source material to determine if you have
used information fairly and accurately or to find out more about
the subject.
A citation, either parentheses including the last name of
the author, a page number, and sometimes the year or a raised
number indicating a footnote or endnote must appear after each
quote or paraphrase in your paper. You need not cite 'common
knowledge' in a field--information that everyone who studies the
subject knows or facts that are generally accepted in all the
sources you consult. Specific statistics, names, dates, places,
findings, and interpretations or ideas that are unique to an
author must be cited.
Generally you will have to include a Bibliography or Works
Cited List, arranged alphabetically, at the end of your paper.
Information you will need to provide includes author or authors'
full names, title of the work, editors--if any, publisher, city
and state of publication (and country if not published in the U.
S.), the year of publication, and sometimes, page numbers.
However, documentation styles vary. Whenever you are given an
assignment that includes research or documentation, be sure to
ask your professor which style you should use. The order of
information as well as spacing and punctuation are different for
different styles. It's important to use a style guide or manual
and to check your work very carefully to be sure that it conforms
exactly to the required style.
*Note: see handouts--
MLA Documentation Style,
APA Documentation Style,
Footnote/Endnote and Bibliography,
Chicago Manual of Style Documentation.
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