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THE WRITING PROCESS Proofreading: Editing Practice (Exercise D)
Identify the sentence-skills mistakes at the underlined spots
in the selection that follows. From the box below, choose the
letter that describes each mistake and write it in the space
provided. The same mistake may appear more than once.
a. Sentence fragment e. Faulty parallelism
b. Run-on f. Apostrophe mistake
c. Missing capital letter g. Missing quotation mark
d. Mistake in subject-verb h. Missing comma after
agreement introductory words
Why I Didn't Go to Church
I almost never attended church in my boyhood years. There was
an unwritten code that the guys on the corner (1) was not to be
seen in (2) churches'. Although there (3 )was many days when I
wanted to attend a church, I felt I had no choice but to stay away.
If the guys had heard I had gone to church, they would have said
things like, "(4) hey, angel, when are you going to (5) fly? With
my group of friends, (6) its amazing that I developed any religious
feeling at all. Another reason for not going to church was my
father. When he was around the house (7) he told my mother,
"Mike's not going to church. No boy of mine is a sissy." My
mother and sister went to church (8), I sat with my father and read
the Sunday paper or (9) watching television. I did not start going
to church until years later. (10) When I no longer hung around
with the guys on the corner or let my father have power over me.
1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. _____ 5. _____
6. _____ 7. _____ 8. _____ 9. _____ 10. _____
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