HUNTER COLLEGE READING/WRITING CENTER
THE WRITING PROCESS
Proofreading: Editing Practice (Exercise C)

     Identify the sentence-skills mistakes at the underlined
spots in the selection that follows.  From the box below, choose
the letter that describes each mistake and write it in the space
provided.  The same mistakes may appear more than once.


     a.  Sentence fragment         d.  Apostrophe mistake
     b.  Run-on                    e.  Faulty parallelism
     c.  Subject-verb disagreement



Looking Out for Yourself
It's sad but true that "If you don't look out for yourself, no one else will." For example, some people have a false idea about the power of a college (1) degree, they think that once they (2) possesses the degree, the world will be waiting on their doorstep. In fact, nobody is likely to be on their doorstep unless, through advance planning, they (3) has prepared themselves for a career. (4) The kind in which good job opportunities exist. Even after a person has landed a job, however, a healthy amount of self-interest is needed. People who hide in corners or (5) with hesitation to let others know about their skills (6) doesn't get promotions or raises. (7) Its important to take credit for a job well-done, whether it involves writing a report, (8) organized the office filing system, or calming down an angry customer. Also, people should feel free to ask the boss for a raise. (9) If they work hard and really deserve it. Those who look out for themselves get the (10) rewards, people who depend on others to help them along get left behind. 1. ______ 3. ______ 5. ______ 7. ______ 9. ______ 2. ______ 4. ______ 6. ______ 8. ______ 10. ______
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