HUNTER COLLEGE READING/WRITING CENTER
THE WRITING PROCESS
Proofreading: Editing Practice (Exercise C)
Identify the sentence-skills mistakes at the underlined
spots in the selection that follows. From the box below, choose
the letter that describes each mistake and write it in the space
provided. The same mistakes may appear more than once.
a. Sentence fragment d. Apostrophe mistake
b. Run-on e. Faulty parallelism
c. Subject-verb disagreement
Looking Out for Yourself
It's sad but true that "If you don't look out for yourself,
no one else will." For example, some people have a false idea
about the power of a college (1) degree, they think that once
they (2) possesses the degree, the world will be waiting on their
doorstep. In fact, nobody is likely to be on their doorstep
unless, through advance planning, they (3) has prepared
themselves for a career. (4) The kind in which good job
opportunities exist. Even after a person has landed a job,
however, a healthy amount of self-interest is needed. People who
hide in corners or (5) with hesitation to let others know about
their skills (6) doesn't get promotions or raises. (7) Its
important to take credit for a job well-done, whether it involves
writing a report, (8) organized the office filing system, or
calming down an angry customer. Also, people should feel free to
ask the boss for a raise. (9) If they work hard and really
deserve it. Those who look out for themselves get the (10)
rewards, people who depend on others to help them along get left
behind.
1. ______ 3. ______ 5. ______ 7. ______ 9. ______
2. ______ 4. ______ 6. ______ 8. ______ 10. ______
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