Proofread the essay below twice.  Read it the first time 
for structure.  Does it have proper essay structure?  If so,
where should the divisions into paragraphs be?  Use the paragraph
sign, ¶, to indicate where a new paragraph should begin. 
Proofread again for sentence structure, consistency of tense,
person, and number, subject-verb agreement, et cetera.  Try to
find seventy errors.


Decisions


     As I get older I began to feel that no decision is simple,

almost any time I have to make a decision there seem to be as

much to be said for one of the solution as there is for the

other.  I use to think you just had to get wise enough to

recognize the "right" answer.  Now I think the problem is, that

you have to stick to your decision after youve made it without

looking back and without regrets.  I think that wavering between

possibility after you have make a decision cause more trouble

than anything else, take the question of marriage for example, a

question on which there is certainly two side.  Their must be

alot to be said for marriage because people keeps on getting

marry.  Its attractions are obvious, in marriage they expect to

have that warm place where they can alway go and find someone who

put them first, who care for you more than anyone else in the

world.  This someone wil listen to all you problem and be

sympathetic, this someone will love your friends and hate your

enemies.  This someone will care about whether you are fed,

clothe, happy, and sexually satisfy.  The two of you will have

children and will share the joys of bringing them up.  No one

else will ever understand you and your life the way this ideal

companion will.  On the other hand marriage must be a real

letdown; because people keep on getting divorce.  This someone

you married will have need that may conflict with yours.  You may

fine that your place is not so warm because your partner put

hiself or herself first, and may also put other people first;

amother, the children, a friend, another lover.  You may both

have problems at the same time and neither one was willing to

listen, you may hate each other friend and like each others

enemies.  You may find that you both need the same dollar for

differnt purpose, so you each may be jealous of what the other

eat, wear or do for fun.  They may have different sexual needs,

and they may want someone else once and a while.  You will almost

certainly fine that children are demanding, difficult and puts a

big strain on the relationship. Maybe you're companion won't

understand you at all.  Some people stay in their marriage and

others don't.  I don't think that the people who stay together

neccessarily have better marriage material between them than the

ones who doesn't.  I think that the people who stay together are

the one who stick with their decisions and work to make them

work.  They figure that the problems of the divorced are differnt

but just as bad, and they might as well keep trying in the

situation of there choice.  In general I approve of this position

because if their is just as much to be say for marriage as there

is for nonmarriage what is the use of shilly-shallying back and

forth?  In the conduct of my life I intend to make my decisions

and then to work too make them work.